All Comments on 'Dominic Ch. 18'

TO MANY WORDS , DID NOT MAKE SENCE

Does Ellen enjoy sex? I know she wants/needs to have it, but the descriptions are rather impersonal. I can't tell if she's actually feeling pleasure in the act, or excitement. It's almost as if she's watching these things happen to someone else.<br><br>

I'll be reading the next installment to see if there is an explanation for Sebastian's very puzzling behavior. One minute he is gentle, the next he's having her beaten with belts, the next he doesn't want anyone else to touch her, and then at the end of this chapter, he's sitting passively watching her be fvcked by his two main rivals. Without some sort of explanation, his behavior is too inconsistent to be believable.

Great updates...all of my questions are being asked.