All Comments on 'Dominique Ch. 01-06'

Sir Nathan

As someone experiencing submission and being relatively new to this lifestyle, Your writing gives me hope and encouragement and longing to be all that i can be. Thank You most greatfully for reminding me of a few lessons i had started to forget. Thank You for the flutter in my heart, the bravery of Your Dominique, The Mastery of Your Andrew. The growth the renewed freedom that i felt in Your words, the courage to continue on and be in my heart who i know i am.... Strange how a year of training and a strangers simple words can give strength in boundless quantities... I truely Thank You.. i shall read on.

I think You know who i am without leaving my name...

excellent mixture of submissive behaviour combined with a loving caring relationshipn. thoroughly enjoyed

I'm only part way through, and am enjoying every moment of it. Simply intoxicating!

I'm impressed with the ease at which you combined love and pain.It's not a simple feat to accomplish in a way that truly works.I do hope there will be plenty more to come.

Sir Nathan,

i have not wanted to put myself in anothers position...until now. Wonderful writing...so many more to read and dream with. Thank You.

for you

i am usually not drawn to the longer stories but once i got to reading this i couldn't stop, i wish i was there, masterful work and i will be reading the chapters that come next...thank you for giving me something to dream about

i love the long stories unlike some who rather short,i would actually buy books written by Y/you. They are lovely and intense,i am fairly new in D/s and have never found anything more in my life to sexually complete me as serving my Master does. This story embraces so many of the thoughts and feelings that a new sub/slave should have/feel/learn/serve.Thank you and i can't wait to get on to the others. submissivly

i have read this story twice now.....i fear i'm addicted. If only Real Life were like this. What a blissfull life it would be.

Someday I will find the right man to take me where dominique has gone....

Thankyou so much for the inspiration into my own sex life, as Andrew said, being Dominant isn't always easy, and ideas are always helpful.

Thank YOU so much. It ist really hyperhot!

I feel a need now!!!!!!

wow loved it you certainly have talent Sir love your stories and i did stop long enough to vote before i continued reading

Marvelous work!

Dominique's story continues and you may find further chapters by clicking on my name.

Note also that it may be interesting to read this story in full before moving onto the updated version. (Available by clicking on the 'website' link on the 'contact' page.)

However, I am particularly pleased that this story is holding up, despite the problems with Lit. And of course, despite its shortcomings in a literary sense, which are many. Thank you to those who listened only to their hearts and who enjoyed what I was trying to do.

SN

Very well told, not quite my cup of tea but still kept me reading. The sign of a good author. Nice to get a picture of the story from both sides.

i feel like this story is written about me. as new to the b/d scene her fears and thoughts echo mine. can't wait to read more.

Speechless... and yet, taking a breath I find the words to express how much pleasure I found in this story. The level of Andrew's Mastery of a skill as well as the deep submission felt by dominique is unparallel to anything I have read. To find a Master that you created by the stroke of your pen is what many women crave. Thank you for allowing us to live the dream for a moment. ~ Red

this girl would just like to say wow! You blew her away! Seriously I've been toying with the idea of being a sub and you've made it sound so sexy and impowering...I usually can't stay focused through more than one or two pages, but you have me hooked! I love this story, I want to be a character in it...I'm soaked right now and hating that I live alone in a city too far away from the one man I trust to be my Master...Blissfully frustrated!!!

Thank you soooo much!

This is a very compelling story, Sir_Nathan, but I knew it would be as this is not the first work of yours that I've read. Parts of this were very difficult and disturbing to read, but I'm glad I followed it through to the end. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters.

i found i too was on a ride...a thrilling and chilling ride...dominque is a very strong character and i hope she comes to realise this...so many of us do not see that in which Our Masters see deep within what is Thiers

Your are undoubtedly the best author on this site! This story rates second only to Culture Shock. Amazing, overwhelming and 100% erotic! Please continue to write!

I absolutely loved this story. A Master/slave story is something that can very easily be distasteful, and you never lost that eloquence you started with throught your piece. I will be returning to read the other chapters!! Way to go, definitely one of the best stories I've read on the site.

I found Culture Shock, by accident, and loved it. So searched for more written by you, have read most of your submissions. This lifestyle has always fascinated me, and reading your stories, just makes me more and more curious! FAntastic work, keep it up!!

Again, you made my heart race. You have such a way with words, the people you write are so believable. The torment Dominique experienced is still driving through my veins, whirling through my thoughts, and tormenting my heart - perhaps the vanilla in me just wants him to really love her, love her, love her, just as he sees her depts and is making her more herself. I cried at the depth of her need for him, and her deep hope that he does love her.

Genius i love it. Breathing heavy just from reading it, keep it up :D

perfect mix of soft and hard!

I became completely drawn in. While certainly not as much as Dominique but almost. I really enjoyed how the story flowed and how the author developed the characters. It will definitely be on my re-read list. I do hope there is more.

Stephanie

i really enjoy your stories :) while culture shock is by far my favorite as its a good insight to the bdsm lifestyle and answered alot of questions, but dominique's storyalways had me coming back for more! i cant wait to read more of your work its outstanding

sinerely distance x

The corner of the park scene was too much, and soured me on this story series. Fantasy or not, Andrew placed Dominique in a situation neither could control - so much for safe, sane, and consensual...

Your writing method is excellent, as usual.

Agreed... that scene went a little too far. I could feel resentment building inside me along with dominique... and while she accepted it, I could not... not a good feeling to have while reading a fantasy. =(

Thank you for posting. You write beautifully and I wish I could do the same. Came so many times to this, but the gravy dinner scene was too much for me. But I guess you can't please everyone. Very well done, 5/5 from me.

Fabulous. Great all around. Thanks. Love the ending.

I think favorite author says it all, Sir. Wondering what you have in store for Domonique...

I can't wait to read more about Dominique's fate.

This has been a fabulous series so far, just as good as it gets when it comes to BDSM. Just the way I like it with the mix of love and torment building to an amazing climax every time. The denial of pleasure and attention part was a little depressing, but it had its purpose. I just hope that doesnt re-accur too often. Kudos on your amazing work!

Pure erotica love it

i am very pleased, SN.

-a

Thank you for a truly well crafted story with real, believeable characters, doing as they are destined to do. Very erotic. Usually i think of myself as being the whipped submissive, but i got into this a lot.

Very good, I loved it!!

Great story. Looking forward to reading the rest. My only advise would be to take out the O/our, W/we, U/us, etc. It's distracting to the reader. Just make it "our, we and us". Other than that I got nothin! Lol :-) I loved it.

It's a great story so far. Undeniably hot scenes tastefully detailed. i love the paragraphs describing the insights of the two characters, but as a sub woman, i miss more about His proccess. Does He evolve in some other way other than confirming she can take everything she is put through? I wish we could know Him a little better. As you may have noticed, I've fallen for Him! haha

i was fully engrossed...bravo,Sir.

The proof/demo she was ordered to do was extreme and dangerous, there was no way he could keep her safe in that situation, so not Safe or Sane.

There was a very brief discussion on limits, if she’s so new to the scene he should have given her a list of options. Not that it would have mattered anyway because he said he’d push those limits whenever he wanted to, so not Consensual.

WTF with the double letter thing? W/we, O/our; I get that you were trying for a mark of respect but it just looks silly in written format. Oh and FFS not capitalising her name because she’s a sub?? Ridiculous.

There were 3 things that made my ditch the story altogether.

1. He is into the dehumanising approach- making her talk about herself in the third person. I despise this approach using this method the Dom(me) is shattering the sub’s personality and making them into a mindless drone fucktoy. The outcome is the the Dom(me) is eradicating whatever it was that attracted him to the sub in the first place.

2. He moved from a mellow post scene conversation to dragging her around by her hair and belittling her. Can anyone say bipolar.

3. He introduces a 3rd party without approaching her first. They’ve been together around a year strictly monogamous then he pulls that lame stunt whilst absent. Prick.

Goodbye Safe, Sane and Consensual.

I’ve tried so many times to get through this story but the “O/our, W/we, U/us” is so distracting & it makes me lose focus, so I end up not finishing. I hope this is RE-written one day with that changed to a regular ours, we, us.

Totally loved this story. Dominque became a pain slut, and what's not to like about that? I played with a woman once who came to realize she was a pain slut -- it was incredible, she could take amazing pain, especially on her bare ass, and loved it. Anyway, the story was VERY arousing, erotic, and kinky.

96% Engrossing, erotic, arousing, fodder for lots of orgasms.

But that section at the lake where everyone just totally ignores her? That was just mean and deliberately hurtful. That would hurt more than the spankings and whippIngs…. not sane and definitely not consensual.. some strange woman slapping her repeatedly across her face…loose teeth?;broken nose? Black eyes?

She should have been screaming RED!!!! that entire weekend.