All Comments on 'Donna's Workout Day'

Wow, only one thing could make this story hotter. One of the potperei of barebacked cocks dropping loads in her whored cunt put a set of twins in her belly and then hubby has to pay a couple of million to raise the little bastard kids. It would be called "the fucking he got for the fuckings she got. then hubby would be out of town more making the slut and her bastards more money so she could have some more bastards.

Very hot story. Loved what you have written and I hope you keep writing. Maybe if the people who put the negative comments would get some once in a while, they would realize that this is just a story and it is meant to be enjoyed. Criticizing you is just a way to make themselves feel better. Good job again.

where was the hubby all this time that she was fucking and partying

It turns me on to read about a sweet little girl getting her pussy stretched out by big cocks.I would love to see that sweet pussy after an all night fuck session, where she was fucked time and again.I would imagine that her pussy lips would be swollen and red.Thanks for the good story.... Rich

For some one as small as you are, one cock in your pussy and one in your mouth, they should have been touching other head-to-head. Not too realistic. I'm waiting for my password so I can sign it. Sorry it's anonymous.8B93

but you need to proof read your story the guys name changes several times in it. At one point he is bob, then john, then scott. Proof read your work.

No more needs to be said.

I would love to read how the guys give her ass a good streatching and how her husband gets suspicios. Perhaps he may even find her with both of them and get off by watching!

WTF??? Absolutely NO thought given to her husband. Donna gallivanting all over town with cockboy Bob and somehow no word gets back to hubby Scott? Donna has not the slightest guilt? Not the slightest concern that this would devastate Scott? And Scott can’t tell her cunt is all stretched out from two immense cocks??? This story makes ZERO sense and ranks among the stupidest stories I’ve ever read here.