All Comments on 'Don't!'

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kelsaffirmkelsaffirmalmost 13 years ago
just what does that blinking caution light mean.... speed up

co conspirators often cause the cave men still on earth to not listen or attempt to understand don't -- perhaps that death or violent wish is exciting; yet only to some -- like some illness, or gene and physical equipment miss alignment, life is matter that happens somewhat chaotically and infrequent sunshine moments of choice for the insensitive.

egeswenderegeswenderalmost 13 years ago
I've heard of minute men...

...but I've never read one. Seriously, what was that? 150 words? If that much?

"Hey, I'm being raped! This is great!" Doesn't happen. Don't want to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Could there be a subtext here...

...of wanting to be dominated? Not sure, but it seemed that the story started by describing our heroine as putting on skimpy, sexy clothes and going to a frat party. Kind of sets a mood.

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