by SpotInTheSand
...break them up! I'm sure, I'm not your only reader anxiously waiting for another chapter and worried that you might change things...you're good. Good writing!
There are some spasmodic moments along the way. But really it is time to bring this to its climax.
Why would Julia want to waste her time on such a spoilt brat.....shakes head....
so this little whiny shit is supposed to be smart? and a shrink, too?
Really liked it. But I must say romance is no basis for a long term relationship. The woman must choose (good with that) and she must submit to him. And he must never ever promise to be faithful. She has to earn that by devotion.
The best he should offer is to keep her informed so she can win him back - if she still wants him. If her answer is no, his attitude should be --> "Next"