All Comments on 'Don't Make Me Say Please Again!'

by peachesmelba

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
HOT, HOT, HOT

Loved it! Very visual-good writing-made me want to be part of the action

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Brilliantly written with the right amount of spice

This story begins with some steamy passion but the heat just keeps on rising. This is a story that surely won't let you down. Yes...hot and spicy.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
multi-lingual he is, as he speaks

I think he might speak in cunteze, with a forked tongue. A really good story, humor and erotic writing woven together to make for interesting reading. I would love to read some more of this sweet girl. It seems that she is very seductive, and will go after what she wants. Thanks for the good story...........Rich

Sapphos SisterSapphos Sisteralmost 15 years ago
We love Lexi!

Lexi is an adorable creation and such a sympathetic character. We were all hoping that she would get it on with Cliff. And when she did, neither she nor we were disappointed. Very hot.

Flora x

jim2268jim2268over 14 years ago
being taken deep and hard

fantastic story full of erotica and sexual tenderness. very exciting reading love don't make me say please again.

KOTKKOTKover 14 years ago
That was HOTTT!!!!!!

I'm sweating. It was really very HOT & SEXY story. Hmmmm.........reminds me of someone. Thanks for sharing.

TomcatfiveTomcatfiveover 13 years ago
Intriguing

I'm still not sure if the ending is reality or fantasy! Very good!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
being from New Orleans i cringed First:

at you use of "cher" It is pronounced " sha with the a sounding like "at". Secondly we absolutley HATE the movie the Big Easy, and we dont talk like we came from France, come down and you"ll see

allimayallimayabout 12 years ago
Anonymous May Be Right

about SOME segments of the population mispronouncing "cher" that way - but having had a quite intimate relationship with a French-Cajun I can tell you Peaches - you got it exactly right! And if Anonymous had read the story correctly she'd have noted that you didn't say that the Cajun liked the movie "the Big Easy" - but that Lexi was using it to fuel her masturbatory fantasies.... Good story and I like your writing style. Thanks for keeping so many of us entertained!

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