by peachesmelba
Loved it! Very visual-good writing-made me want to be part of the action
This story begins with some steamy passion but the heat just keeps on rising. This is a story that surely won't let you down. Yes...hot and spicy.
I think he might speak in cunteze, with a forked tongue. A really good story, humor and erotic writing woven together to make for interesting reading. I would love to read some more of this sweet girl. It seems that she is very seductive, and will go after what she wants. Thanks for the good story...........Rich
Lexi is an adorable creation and such a sympathetic character. We were all hoping that she would get it on with Cliff. And when she did, neither she nor we were disappointed. Very hot.
Flora x
fantastic story full of erotica and sexual tenderness. very exciting reading love don't make me say please again.
I'm sweating. It was really very HOT & SEXY story. Hmmmm.........reminds me of someone. Thanks for sharing.
I'm still not sure if the ending is reality or fantasy! Very good!
at you use of "cher" It is pronounced " sha with the a sounding like "at". Secondly we absolutley HATE the movie the Big Easy, and we dont talk like we came from France, come down and you"ll see
about SOME segments of the population mispronouncing "cher" that way - but having had a quite intimate relationship with a French-Cajun I can tell you Peaches - you got it exactly right! And if Anonymous had read the story correctly she'd have noted that you didn't say that the Cajun liked the movie "the Big Easy" - but that Lexi was using it to fuel her masturbatory fantasies.... Good story and I like your writing style. Thanks for keeping so many of us entertained!