All Comments on 'Don't Piss Off Lou'

Well done and well written. I love a "happy ending" as much as the next guy. I'll keep my eye out for Lou.

Hahahahahahahahahgaaahawhahahahahahahahahohhhhhh.....hehhahaha

not that comical... the comic relief gig with Lou wasn't enough to overcome the aweful/serious sexual crime against him... can't believe any decent, healthy man would stick his dick in another woman whose been fucking left and right, with males who's been fucking left and right before that, with so much diseases going on,,, <p>

almost worked; but not quite from here... <p>

it would have worked better, even if it was intended to be humor/satire, if it was told straight forward --- or rather, in a "straight faced manner --- without too much a big finger pointing to a big tongue, firmly planted in the cheek; when it's done like that, it diminished the humor and satire originally envisioned...

Enjoyed your story, and I did meet Lou once; though he did charge me for his services. What use is a soul anyway?

My best regards

Loved the Author's Note, at the end.

lovely

Iwould love to give you 200 butI cant.Can I say any more.

I didn't think that Lars and Jan would like having their story published, so I called them Sven and Sally instead.

At times I smiled; In some places I actualy laughed and the post reconciliation sub plot was certainly original with its literary allusions. So, can I complain? Of course not!

I didn't notice the author comment until I read somebody else's comment. Well done!

I don't often comment on the submissions here, but yours certainly deserves a kudo or two.

A little seasoning and you are ready to go professional.

A couple of your "cutesies" were just a tad too obvious, but even so, they detracted but little from the thrust (no pun intended) of your story. Write some more. I liked it.

I am not Lou, but if you knew who I was, you'd be unbearable. Keep up the good work.

Me.

Laughed all the way through it, sometimes really out loud. Especially liked the "Lars & Jan" author's comment. Keep writing, you have a real talent. Southronstyle

But I rate thee low because he took back a woman who had cheated on him over time. She did it for work, and therefore was a whore. Be is betting than being saddled with trash. Trash is trash, always throw out the trash! Better yet burn it so it cant come back!

Thanks, it made my morning!

Apart of funny, it was quite original. I enjoyed the read, thank you!

KEEP WRITING

an unlikely combination on Lit.<BR>

I like it.

A cracking story,this hot arsed woman certainly got a scorching,the one comment so far which really did not like this tale was only to be expected.

love original well written stories.

A great read,would make a good film.I do not know much about politics rhe other side of pond,so cant comment.If madonna is of to keep lucifer company ,then so am I.Lets face it the other place must be pretty boring.

I have two dicks,pricks call them what you like,I will visit you in the very near future the you know how stupid you have been.LUCIFER SON OF DARKNESS AND MOTHER OF FUN? Bring your own vaseline ,you will need it.

Another cracker, full of laughs. No wonder your stories are popular. I love your dry sense of humour. Keep writing, I'll keep reading.

Very nicely done. You took a charged topic and made it funny without cheapening it with mockery. Good work.

for the judgement day always cums TK U MLJ LV NV

he should have gotten a hiv positive person to fuck her and give her aids. then divorced her.

she is a slut a cheater and not worth a damn

Brilliant comedic story, well done

JJ