All Comments on 'Don't You Want Me'

Good heavens! That was awful! “Happy ending” indeed!

But this just begs for a continuation.

If only i had a device to brainwash people......the good thing is that at least enough of her mind was leftover that she wasn't left a drooling vegetable, and she even helped him with his screw-up! This is 5 star material.

I truly enjoyed this story from beginning to end. I really hope you add a second chapter, as while the general eroticism from the situation and from Madeline's perspective is very tantalizing, there is little in terms of sexual contact beyond what could be done in a bar booth. Please Jukebox, I implore you; write more of these characters, it would be brilliant

I love your sense of humour. The man with a the sex ray misfires, ha!

I realize that most of the stories you do are short, but this one could use a few more chapters. :)

I can only hope that it is not in fact the ending........