All Comments on 'Door Prizes'

I was following this up until Monty and Frank. Whoever they are I have no idea what they were talking about

I read this all the way through but I was confused most of the time. I got the feeling that the 'adults' are from other stories from you and that this was the introduction of the next generation. You should have put in a foreward or prescript or something to let new readers know. This didn't come across as the loving polyamorous introduction you might have thought it was. It felt more like a cult indoctrination with drugs and brainwashing not LOVE as claimed in the story. Sometimes the old adage "less is more" doesn't always successfully apply. More Background and set-up was needed.