All Comments on 'Door to Door Salesgirl'

Very hot. I think I am addicted to your writing. You have a way of making your story very vivid. Keep writing.

Joan,

I have to say that was a great story, I enjoyed it from the start all the way to the end, as I wanted it to never end. . . . . . . . You have no idea of how hard that story got me, even at my age. . . . sort of felt like John and was hoping my doorbell would ring. hehe. . . . . . . Is there another one you have done, that you recomend?

It has been a while since I have read on here, but I will return sooner now, hoping for more from you. Thank you very much Joan. . . . . . you have awakened my desire again!

Love your submissions, and hope this finds you well. . . . . .

Sincerely,

Lar. . . . . . .

totally awesome story, kept me hard and horny to the end, I would love for the girls to visit again

I LIKED IT! 5

i need such a fucking too

This is awful. No one 18+ would say sis every five fucking seconds, the girl who had a larger chest would have larger nipples, repeating the same letter seven times to show slurring is obnoxious, sweatpants are anti-sexy, and this generally sounds like it was written by an old guy. Also, there's no reason to qualify you aren't gay or bi, it adds nothing to the story.

Plus sex with two strangers unprotected is stupid, a great way to catch STDs or get a young woman pregnant (which I highly doubt your wife would like). Very few eighteen year olds don't know what cum looks like, and of those, none would want some old grungy man in sweatpants to fuck 'em.

What was in the wine? 0.o

Super story, John's experience would be a fantasy come true for me. I guess I'm about the same age but I have to admit i wouldn't measure up to his impressive virility and stamina

Very erotic story. Nicely paced - this old timer really enjoyed it!