All Comments on 'Dormitory Fire Drill'

Really. Pleeeazzze. :-) This cast of character is just too good to let them go. Bev has just discovered she likes being in charge, Melissa always knew that she did, and 'Lisa' is finding a whole new fun way to play. Looks like they intend to have follow on adventures. Sure would like to hear about them!

THE first couple paragraphs read like this is going be a DRY story,,,BUT it picks up heat with the FIRE ALARM and ends with a bit of intrigue that legy my soul in fire anticpating a follow up that'll include Melissa.PLEASE don't disapoint your other fans and me.

Lots of steamy sex and dripping eroticism. The transition from resistance to acceptance to satisfaction was handled well. Great pacing and details. Believable and likable characters. Tremendous climax and the finale leaves lots of hints for future adventures.

Blazing sex and interesting sexual situations. Believable exploration of sexual frontiers. Realistic and likable characters. Strong dialogue. Please write more soon.

You story was Intricately woven to its final climax! Great job, keep writing!

Didn't know how this was going to "play out" -- you got me stroking in panties!! Hot!

Any chance of a second chapter, perhaps an all gurl threesome?

Great. Please write more about girlfriend/wife gradualy enticing man to wear her clothes and him getting to like it.

Saw your post in the thread 'Who have you caught/seen having sex?' and thought it so well written I just had to read one of your stories. This is first one I've read and I found it wonderful. The description of the couple in bed together was extremely erotic and when we got to the part we he had to wear her knickers (panties) I was completely hooked. The scene were they have sex whilst he's still wearing the panties was glorious and made me fill my own. Thank you

I have to admit, that was simply hot, had me hard through much of it and the further it went along I pretty much stayed hard. The thought of that silky feel against my skin admittedly turned me on. The whole scenario was enticing.

Loved your story of hit love and loving sex .. I need a girl like Melissa .. and her double dildo and friends .. more of your wonderful writing please