All Comments on 'Double Trouble'

Overall the story was good. However I would suggest some tweaks to it. For starters, I'd either tag it as World of Warcraft and/or put it in Celebrity. Or, barring those ideas, I would assume that my reader has not played World of Warcraft and describe exactly what a Pandarian and a Blood Elf is. Get descriptive with it. There was so much detail in here that could've been put in. 3/5 overall from me.