by MacSwain612
Some hot concepts, but a lot of things don't feel like they're fleshed out enough. There's no background or concept about the FMC & her husband's relationship. For him to suddenly be okay with this feels completely out of the blue. Without that, I question why her being married was even brought up. The whole thing feels weird. It really takes me out. Sorry.
sooooo, that ended a bit prematurely,,dont you think? and where was todd through all this? he seemed more than anxious to share his wife! well written., well paced,, liked it..