All Comments on 'Doug and Diane Ch. 02'

by MacSwain612

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shadrachtshadrachtabout 1 year ago

Some hot concepts, but a lot of things don't feel like they're fleshed out enough. There's no background or concept about the FMC & her husband's relationship. For him to suddenly be okay with this feels completely out of the blue. Without that, I question why her being married was even brought up. The whole thing feels weird. It really takes me out. Sorry.

olblueyesolblueyes8 months ago

sooooo, that ended a bit prematurely,,dont you think? and where was todd through all this? he seemed more than anxious to share his wife! well written., well paced,, liked it..

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