All Comments on 'Dr. Bather'

you cant stop there its very good but you have to do more of the story

Great! What happened the next day?

I really like where this is going.......

please continue this I love it.

Sally,

Liked your story...I was hoping you would suck off the good doctor...I'm a 47 y.o. man with a nice cock and love to lick hot pussy...I jerked off my long hot HARD cock to your story, and in my mind,added you suxking off my cock for me, as I likced fingered and toungefucked your sweet pussy and hot ass...MMMMMMMMMMmm

L.A. Jay

I want to know what happened!!!

this is good but not original as i have read the first and second part about a month ago

So many spelling and grammatical mistakes ruined what might have been an exciting story. Also numerous continuity errors. Needs re-reading, correcting and re-submitting.

It's not that the story line is bad (okay, "real life"; whatever), but the writing is terrible. Between the typos (I never knew that "f" was a word.) and the word choice errors (please, get a dictionary and look up "too"), you need to both learn how to write (elements of spelling, sentence construction, and grammar) but you also need to hire a really good editor. And no, I have no interest in the job; I don't have that much time.

-- KVK

How can I give you a score on this when the story is not finished?

For a starter you got everyone huffing and puffing and asking for more... not bad at all!!

Ok, the teasing at the (no)ending had something, all right - a lot, to do with it. So now you have to meet again with the nasty Dr. Bather and tell us all about it.

Please continue with the story.

you naughty minx...I didn't want this to end. going to your story listing hoping g to find chapter two.

4+ (4.4 = 92%, ☆☆☆☆+)!