All Comments on 'Dragon Clans Bk. 01 Pt. 23'

This is the chapter that was supposed to be edited? I'd say that there is a bit of improvement, but not enough. I'd also say that the editor didn't do his/her job correctly. Still, the story is quite good.

Good morning, hope everyone had a good weekend. Editor decided he wanted to start fresh with Book 2, soooo....you are kind of stuck with me till the end of this one. About 3-4 more chapters. Thanks for reading me, and putting up with the errors here and there.

Vjax

The girls really should be more considerate toward Micheal