by Just_Jezebel
I love the anticipation and the teasing.
I can't wait to see them fuck for real! It's gonna be... mmm
Thank you for your positive feedback. I had part three written but i'm currently rewriting about 90% of it due to changes I made in part two. Cin and Fia were talking very loudly in my ear and wanted to go in a different direction. And, well... who am I to argue with those two? So it might be a bit before you see another chapter but I promise that it will be worth the wait. Keep an eye out though, I am hoping to submit a whole new story based on the Greek god Eros (god of lust, sex and desire) very soon. And yes.. he's a sexy alpha male who knows exactly what he wants and has no problem getting it. (winks)
Quite enjoying the build up between the two leads, I'm hoping it goes on for awhile. .. that constant aching for release is very stimulating.
Don't just leave off on the story. Come on!! It was a great story and then you just quit writing it. Please finish the story!!! I am so sick and tired of good stories just being dropped off like nobody is invested in them. This is a great story and a completely original premise, don't stop now after two chapters. Aren't you invested in your own story? Please keep writing.
I'm really enjoying this. It does need some editing (there are few typos and continuity issues) but the story itself is compelling. I hope you'll continue.
One more story never finished. About the story: over arrogance leads to stupidity and fail. A male dragon that knows what he wants? Surely not. Both like their own arrogance more then just to do it. Seems much like politics: pretending to want so much, did not getanything done. Like finishing an story. Sad, vould be an really nice story - if content would progress and just be finished.
SO FUCKING FRUSTRATING!!! It is now my policy to read the comments at the end of every multi-part story to check for the “please finish the story” remarks before I start reading, so I’ll know not to waste my time. If I were a talented writer I would be tempted to hijack and finish all the excellent but abandoned starts of stories that languish here.