All Comments on 'Drawing Class'

Seems to me the voyeurism / exhibitionist part was pretty short compared to the fairly long and detailed sex (good stuff, there, by the way). I liked the story, but would like a little more buildup, too. Keep writing!

This an 18 year old boy's jerk off fantasy. Great if you enjoy that sort of Macdonalds style sex then you'll really love this. BUT, if you want something with a little more subtlety and refinement then this is a little Wam Bam thanya Mam and a big let down to what could have been a really really good story - being an artist myself you could have really made more of it, instead you just wrote a stroke story.