All Comments on 'Dreams'

A lot of fun. Thanks!

Time will tell in real life. This wasnt too cohesive to read.I doubt the author wanted it to be.The two-three line paragraphs gave this story a staccato rhythm. Which was sufficient in terms of highlighting the immediate sensation but downplayed a overall, residual impression .

Maybe I'm overthinking things . In my estimation if the author wanted to do a impressionistic, dreamy essay - he suceeded.

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Get it on while you can. After 69 things can go downhill fast! Delightful characters.

the casino bit was fun but then went downhill faster than a turd down the drain...didn't like all the messing about.....not needed - ruined the fun......