by SexyBeast
good writing ... excellent story ... very hot and sooo nasty ... PLEASE keep it going
I just knew that Lindsey HAD to be next...
loved the detail, the use of dialogue
very hot
omg this one was nastier than the first. i loved it. masturbated through the whole thing. wonderful. hopefully ben can fuck all 3 of his daughters. anxious to read the last chapter.
Well written and other than some grammatical errors, all in all, very good story. I do hope you continue with the storyline. I think daddy likes the idea of linsey joining in.
Well done in a way thats more believable than most daddy/daughter stories...
Small name mix up early on page 1 was a slight hiccup but a 5/5 in my book