by Brightdawn
I'm not going to be able to take a shower now without flashbacks.
Excellent... next best thing to actually being there.
...sparring with each other, one gaining ground while the other is forced back, only to reverse positions a moment later. We break away from the kiss, both of us gasping for breath."
And left me gasping for breath, great story telling!! Your detail really brings the story to life.
Loved this one hun. Want so bad to be in that story the way you wrote it. Kisses
Want to take a shower with you for sure. Very descriptive. very erotic. Hope you continue writing.
Wow we loved this story - it's like I wrote it myself - i so love to make love in the shower with my lover - its so hot!
incredible ....i can picture myself there doing that with you .....very very well done!!!!
R U dreaming, or what? Not a story in my book, but a projection?
fantastic story - i don't know what the commenter below me is on about.
That was the most erotic shower scene ever! The person who didn't like it is all alone in their thoughts. I thought it was fabulous. Keep up the good work!