All Comments on 'Dripping Wet'

by Brightdawn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
hotter than the water!

I'm not going to be able to take a shower now without flashbacks.

Excellent... next best thing to actually being there.

MnRiderMnRiderover 18 years ago
"Our tongues meet in a duel, ...

...sparring with each other, one gaining ground while the other is forced back, only to reverse positions a moment later. We break away from the kiss, both of us gasping for breath."

And left me gasping for breath, great story telling!! Your detail really brings the story to life.

AzuldrgonAzuldrgonabout 18 years ago
Mmmm yummy

Loved this one hun. Want so bad to be in that story the way you wrote it. Kisses

AzuldrgonAzuldrgonabout 18 years ago
Love this one

Want to take a shower with you for sure. Very descriptive. very erotic. Hope you continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Wow! I so relate

Wow we loved this story - it's like I wrote it myself - i so love to make love in the shower with my lover - its so hot!

alfa_lupogrigioalfa_lupogrigioalmost 18 years ago
omfg!!!!!

incredible ....i can picture myself there doing that with you .....very very well done!!!!

don87654don87654almost 18 years ago
Shitty Teaser--Needs Work....A LOT OF WORK!

R U dreaming, or what? Not a story in my book, but a projection?

lillefleurlillefleurabout 15 years ago
nice

fantastic story - i don't know what the commenter below me is on about.

angelgwenangelgwenover 14 years ago
Awsome!!!

That was the most erotic shower scene ever! The person who didn't like it is all alone in their thoughts. I thought it was fabulous. Keep up the good work!

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerralmost 14 years ago
GREAT STORY

Great story. It inspired me to do TEST RUN

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