All Comments on 'Driven Ch. 01'

Now get that next chapter up there baby. It's as hot as hell.

Can't wait to see what happens next. Of course I am picturing this as I read it ;)

An Awesome beginning KJ ... sitting on the edge of my char anticipating what might be in store here ....

The first few paragraphs reminded me of a song from the early 80's by " Rick Okasic and the cars " sung by Benjamin Orr titled " whos gonna drive you home " .. a fav of mine .

patiently waiting .....

Chainzz

I'm starting to get hard just thinking about what might happen next. Great beginning....I'm on to part 2!

Looking forward to reading part 2. This story has great potential! I too am starting to get hard just thinking about what's next.

Lookinf forward to reading the next chapter-very nice job-plus you can't beat a story that has my name as one of the main characters :D Really nice job KJ