All Comments on 'Earth Day Love In'

Nice story... good luck in the contest.

Where do I begin?

Not much of a story, was there?

Secondly, much of what you told the reader, you should have shown the reader. Lastly, not to belabor this story, and I use that loosely, you need to break out your dialogue from the rest of the paragraph and, at least, add more description. Your story lacks imagery. There is none.

After clicking on your name, it amazes me that you've written so many stories. I clicked on a few and they are all the same, but for the title.

Is this a joke?