by susansnow
short, and felt like a wasted opportunity. no actual penetration. this is that 'weak threesome' stuff. and why does the tag say 'two men one woman sex'?
You get right to it which is what the reader is after. Threesomes are a delight, even those that are not as perfect as your characters. Who does not adore black women?
Your last line about "meat" is not the best description for a cock but a little edit isn't a bad thing. Don't know if you recall this story, it is so long ago in the life of a mayfly.
Tags for the story are wrong, and it's short, but this is a hot little tale.
The WF/WM/BF scenario was erotic. However the story was too short and too rushed.