All Comments on 'Elaine on the Run Ch. 04'

You're a fantastic writer =)

I just finished the whole series in two days--between work. Thanks for an engaging, well written story.

Read your entire series - couldn't put it down!!! Keep it going for sure! How about some role switching for Elaine? She has a lot of payback coming her with her female tormentors & captors. Solid writing style and narrative descriptions therein.

Loved reading the series. Looking forward to your next submission.

Everything about this story was great and I really enjoyed it. Will be waiting patiently for the next submission. :)

Just read all your stories in one go. Amazing story line hope you have more stories to write :)

I came extreamly close to hateing you a few times. As a slave to be myself I wanted to kick and scream and punch somebody many times while reading Elaine on the run. I cried a few times both in anger and happiness. I was over welmed with joy when elaine was reunited with Roy. Never has a story put me thru so many emotions. Thank you for writimg it. I look forward to reading more of your works.

~Ians slave

Still think Sam actually showed more feeling for her than Roy .

She could have gone with Amanda...

Oh, thank you, I am so hooked, I could read forever! You write well, the story develops fantastic and the combination of sex and Elaine's inner thoughts is, well, just great.

a rough,tough never ending relay race of fucks where the woman was the object passed over from one tormentor to the next!! story matter in between tattered bits of a kind of gang war!! ;))rough fuck happy readers are gonna love this!! ;))