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Click here"Why didn't you tell me you were a virgin?" he asked.
"I figured you'd find out anyway," she said cheekily. She was rewarded by a sudden buck of his hips that did things to her unexplainable by words.
Without skipping a beat he went maddeningly back to the prior pace.
"God you're good at this," she said, feeling her orgasm building. It caused her walls to tighten suddenly which was driving John wild.
"I love you so much, Eli," he said, planting a soft kiss on her mouth.
"I love you too, Dad."
He began to pick up the pace again slowly. He felt it coming closer and closer with each thrust. When finally it came, a moan tore forth from deep inside him.
Great writing but there better be a part 4. I get to the last sentence and I'm looking for the rest of the story. Really enjoyable reading¡
I agree, this is an absolute work of art, great writing, I was lost in the story. All I can say is fantastic, please keep writing, or get yourself published so I can buy the book!!
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Absolutely awesome. The dialog was perfect. The set up wasn't rushed or forced. Wonderful writing. Keep it up.
that was excellent..... on soooooo many levels. if you stop now ..... no, no threats..... just please don't stop.
Thanjk you lass, a nice tale here.... Well constructed with effort spent on the emotional turmoils of the Topic and nice ending too.. Able to visualize the characters here a mark of a well writen story and the ending was nicely erotic too
This story is awesome! Loved your writing and loved the sexual tension you were able to create!
Wonderful build up. Now its time to explore the possibilities.... Please give us more.