Eli's Awakening

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"Why didn't you tell me you were a virgin?" he asked.

"I figured you'd find out anyway," she said cheekily. She was rewarded by a sudden buck of his hips that did things to her unexplainable by words.

Without skipping a beat he went maddeningly back to the prior pace.

"God you're good at this," she said, feeling her orgasm building. It caused her walls to tighten suddenly which was driving John wild.

"I love you so much, Eli," he said, planting a soft kiss on her mouth.

"I love you too, Dad."

He began to pick up the pace again slowly. He felt it coming closer and closer with each thrust. When finally it came, a moan tore forth from deep inside him.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great writing but there better be a part 4. I get to the last sentence and I'm looking for the rest of the story. Really enjoyable reading¡

HaydenDLinderHaydenDLinderover 2 years ago

Holy crap! I LOVED that! 5 Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

All of that build-up to such a short sex scene. Smdh.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Exceptional!!

I agree, this is an absolute work of art, great writing, I was lost in the story. All I can say is fantastic, please keep writing, or get yourself published so I can buy the book!!

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
ART

This is art!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
WOW

Absolutely awesome. The dialog was perfect. The set up wasn't rushed or forced. Wonderful writing. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
wow

this got me cuming so much!`

Fantasy KissFantasy Kissabout 18 years ago
excellent

that was excellent..... on soooooo many levels. if you stop now ..... no, no threats..... just please don't stop.

HL55HL55about 18 years ago
Excellent wee Tale

Thanjk you lass, a nice tale here.... Well constructed with effort spent on the emotional turmoils of the Topic and nice ending too.. Able to visualize the characters here a mark of a well writen story and the ending was nicely erotic too

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
fabulous

please, please write more!!!

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