All Comments on 'Ellen's Elf Ch. 02'

Great writing. Love that your characters and story surround the erotica--it's not just all sex, which can be moronic after awhile. I hope you aren't done with them yet, even though you say you are.

well done and well ended.

Although I was disappointed in the direction the story went I found it to be very well written and emotionally compelling.

I certainly did. I thought the sex might be just the two women making out but that took a really dark turn. You portrayed the (often but not always to be fair) boorish sh*ts who go to prostitutes really well, explaining perfectly why their wives might not want them! Before that the lesbian loving had been wonderful. This last section took us into a whole different realm that i was not expecting and probably had i known i'd have avoided reading.