All Comments on 'Ely'

This story needs a few more chapters. Great start.

I love the premise and look forward to many more chapters.

Nice start can you make it longer

The sotry has promise. But in future stories the commonly used slang term for an orgasm/semen/etc is "cum" not the other "come" variety.

Great story, Tx! Reminds me of my first time.

Nicely done.

Thanks for sharing.

only because you left me with my tongue hanging out wishing for more. Really enjoyed the way you put the story together and definitely hope that you will follow up at least one more segment.

Hi Tx . I LOVE your stories, especially On the boardwalk. Your new storie,Ely, is hot , and i like the mother-daughter thing. I simply LOVE your sence of humor - keep whriting. Maj ;o)

The story was written beautifully. I enjoyed every word and the descriptiveness was extremely hot. Made me wish I had gone through the same experience with my friends moms.

What a super read, well written and just loved the caricatures that you drew, I hope that you do a follow up and we can cary on with them, once again great read thanks for posting....

Thanks for a very enjoyable read.

I liked the story until Jenny showed up. From there on it was boring for me. Just too unbelievable.

The sex between Ann and Ely was great. You have a real knack for sex scenes, but this story falls apart when Jenny shows up.

I'm not crazy about stories that start out by jumping right into the sex without some build up, but this was well done.

Some readers might complain that it's not like real life because what Mother and Daughter would act this way, but I don't want to read real life. Real life is mostly boring and Ely fell into most every guys fantasies. True life, probably not but who knows it could be possible. I'm just envious that it was him and not me LOL. Great story, thanks

Not often do you read of family education programmes like this. Good luck Ely.

To Anonymous of 3/08/11 'come' is the correct spelling and the other version is usually only employed by American slang users.

What an interesting story. WOnder why they did not fuck, More chapters!!

this was excellent y ou need to write more

Hope this is one story you are revisiting; highly deserving of more chapters!

Such a good, and Hot story, worthy of the five stars I have it. But Tx, you need a TxRad2 to finish your stories. This one is screaming for another chapter. What did the husband's letter say, and will Ann finally divorce his ass. Is there a future for the ladies with Ely. If so, we would like to read the rest of their story.

Another fine story from the author, I am hooked on him now. This is the second story I have read of his but he has a long list to read but this is the last one tonight,

It would have been nice to see what happened if Jenny had turned and told Ann that she had been on birth control pills for a couple of months. Bareback is always the better way!! I'm looking forward to the first fuck part of the story.