by Maxwell-
Can't wait to see where you go from here. Maybe less on the literary and more on the erotica?
Great nonetheless.
I enjoyed it too. Though i do agree that you might have spent a bit too long describing stuff in the beginning.
Brilliant sex scene though.
Please write chapter 2.
More please! I loved it. Your writing style is great. And the story is very enthralling.
...and I disagree that there was too much build up, but then I would :) It gives the fucking a much-needed third dimension. I do wish there was more.
It's tragic that this was never continued. If perchance you should see this comment, Maxwell, please consider doing so! I would be more than happy to be your editor, should you need one. :)