All Comments on 'Emily Ch. 01'

:) very good! I like this a lot! Can't wait for part 2!

Emily has obviously decided she is happy with the prospect of the vocation her boyfriend has arranged for her.

Looking forward to reading her equally well-written report of her enjoyment of her employment.

And hoping a few of her trusted clients will be privileged to forgo the condoms - for both Emily's and Braden's loving pleasure together after work :)

You shoulda said no and be done with it if he really loved you he wouldn't have exploit you to a bunch of men you don't even know as soon as you found out it was a whorehouse you shoulda too his keys and drove off no questions asked

Sad but familiar story

Honestly the story is kind of sad and maybe even a little scary. But your grammar is good, which is always appreciated when reading something. Over all, good job!