All Comments on 'Emma's Dilemma'

I have to admit I was not attracted to the celebrity sex genre. But the way you wrote it and described the sensations made it seem natural and of course very hot and sexy. I love the way you describe the sensation of a hard cock filling your pussy...I have often wondered what the act of sex feels like form the other side--I know how good it feels from my side. The hot tight warmth wrapping around the hard shaft....well you get my drift. So congratulations you won me over with your great skill and descriptive writing. Would love to hear back from you.

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Very nice short story. I hope you continue this. You ease into the action at a good pace and you have just enough details to make it seem like we're watching it unfold before our eyes. I definitely think you should do more with this.

This was very well paced and very well-written. I normally don't read through the celebrity section, but in this case I'm glad I did.

I will definitely be working my way through reading the rest of your stories.

Thanks for a great read.

The lovely Emma Watson -- you certainly have good taste in women. I noticed on your bio page that you'd like to spend a night with her. I presume that fantasy includes cunnilingus.

Like some other commentators, I rarely read celeb fiction. In this case, a story led me to you, your quote led me to look through your story list and find this, and I really liked it.

(But I assume that Emma would be unlikely to say "dude" for "guy" --- it sounds American. "bloke"? or has British slang changed too much?)

What I liked about it being about Emma was that it made it so easy to imagine. I'm sure that a lot of blokes have been trying to get a peek up her skirt, ever since Hermione went to Hogwarts.

Good story, I like the relationship between the women particularly. Is the character Emma Watson at all related to the character of the same name in Jane Austen's incomplete novel "The Watsons"? I was looking for parallels and didn't see them -- perhaps I got distracted by the erotic content?

In any case, I enjoy your writing very much.

a delightfully playful story of hot sex