All Comments on 'Emma's Family Affair'

Wow, hot story. Loved it.

My sister's name is Emma, which is why I like this series.

Awesome, Dude.

Very well done.

Nicely done. You almost write like me (lol).

I say, jolly good job, mate.

Good story, I really enjoyed this.

I hope that the story continues with the rest of the family getting some fucking. Thanks

Strange how this group of writers always make positive comments on each others work. Are you all a cartel designed to boost each others votes, or is it just one not-so-hot writer who uses a lot of pseudonyms to try and influence his/her scores?? I think the latter! No Brit that I know speaks like Simon Cowell is supposed to - dontcha know! Whoever you really are, don't be so fucking stupid.

For your information I've only just started submitting stories and don't know anyone on the website, let alone being part of a cartel. Thank you though, for that constructive criticism and I'll make sure to leave it up there as a fine example of how to embarrass yourself with imbecilic accusations...

Dick

"Double took" is nonsense. "Double take" is a noun. There is no past tense for nouns. "Diamante heart" is sufficiently arcane that it will puzzle most, if not all readers. Three paragraphs in and I'm already thinking more about the author than the story. Thanks for nothing.

Hey, give the guy a break. He makes one friggin' typo and you guys are all over him.

Where's your story? Huh? What have you written, genius?

This author writes a well crafted story and you morons can't even write one grammatically correct sentence. All you do is bash and chase away the good writers.

Idiots.

Good story although not really into incest. Going to read your other stories now. Thank you for sharing.

I ENJOYED IT.

It wasn't a bunch of drivel that a lot of these stories are!

thanks for writing

Sexmate