All Comments on 'Emma's New World'

WOW - do you know how many times I came reading this story? Soooo hot! You are an expert writer of erotica!

with the exception of a few errors in grammar. I found myself identifying with her. Nice BDSM story without the cruelty.Refreshing!

very well written. I enjoyed the way you slowly revealed the extent of her submission. It's a long story but worth every minute it took to read it.

hello Emma: I enjoyed reading this story a lot and I look forward to reading the others

Came upon your story by accident and found such enjoyable reading! I felt you had wrote a bit more than the usual stories on this site. Do not fail in writing more, I do enjoy reading your stories! Richard (nekoca@lycos.com)

and beautifully written. Bravo!

what a great story , well written and very horny , thanks , trevor

I enjoyed the way you presented your submission. I look forward to reading more of your stories. I especially liked that you weren't cruelly introduced to it. I wish I could be introduced just so.

neen

Outstanding! Well written and totally intensely erotic!