by flim62
You ended the storyline way too quick. This had potential "legs" to run into a series... Think about it... Good story - needs a little proofing....
Once you write something, you should read it yourself at least once. More than 2 dozen typos detract from the flow. And if you expect ME to read it once, so should YOU.
U talked more about your aunt than you did about fucking this chick. Evidently her pussy was really bad for you not to dwell on it!
Great story and very erotic. Was like a how to
Great “fringe benefits” in that job!