All Comments on 'Employee Report'

by flim62

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tomar82403tomar82403over 17 years ago
Ended it way too quickly

You ended the storyline way too quick. This had potential "legs" to run into a series... Think about it... Good story - needs a little proofing....

The NavigatorThe Navigatorover 17 years ago
Interesting, but...

Once you write something, you should read it yourself at least once. More than 2 dozen typos detract from the flow. And if you expect ME to read it once, so should YOU.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
why didn't u just do a story on fucking your aunt?

U talked more about your aunt than you did about fucking this chick. Evidently her pussy was really bad for you not to dwell on it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story and very erotic. Was like a how to

Great “fringe benefits” in that job!

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