All Comments on 'End of Year Bonus'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good Beginning

Looks like the beginning of a new series to me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
not bad

but not your best, felt a little rushed and the humiliation felt more cruel and petty than erotic. Not that cruel and petty is bad... just lacked some of the sexual intensity that most of your other stories featured. Glad to see you posting again though!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Another POV

Can you write the story, but from Kev's POV? I really want to know what went down.

croydon2000croydon2000almost 4 years ago
Yep...

...another great story...hmm love to hear more about her going back to his place and in detail what happened..drinking his piss...etc....then reaction when seeing tape is blank...and then made to go with someone else in office..just as disgusting..ha.x know its an old story..but noticed ur back now..great news...love ur stories.x

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