All Comments on 'Endings Ch. 06'

PERFECT!

just...perfect!

just perfect! very very romantic.. made me cry.. i hope i would have a happy ending just like that.. (sob sob)

Perfection. Thank you!

I do love my happy endings, and that one was very well done. :) Sigh. Love how Paul came around, and how Max had the strength and sense to wait for him.

I can't give a more agreeable ditto. All the other comments were right on the money. Lol! Fantasticles!! Thanks for sharing... Cat

Perfect ending! Each chapter kept me coming back for more and I loved it!

heart bleading, very romantic and some story i couln´t wait to read more about. well, there is the old saying "there are either two tradgedies... not getting what one wants and getting it..." meaning now that i know that it was indeed a happy ending i know also that this romantic story is at its ending also... which leaves me a little sad as to not being able to read on...

Another incredible story, ingarlm! Whenever I see your name attached to something, I can guarantee that it will be warm, believable, and well-written. Thanks so much!

Ohhh, that was such a great story. Loved everything about it- perfect- just like all your other submissions are. You were again able to create such rounded characters, with a depth that gives them the possibility to really be real. All of them are so lovable (just like all your others ;P) and I even liked Cam in the end-- after all he did bring Max and Paul together... So, wonderful in every sense. But what about that third page??? Damn tease you are-- really hoped for a moment you had their wedding or another epilogue-- but then again we read the ending already in chapter 1...Anyways, loved it. Can't wait for your next story!

And quite the rollercoaster..you were right! Great Work. Keep it up:)

Lord she is great isnt she. Well your stories get better and better. Every time I read them. Great job!

I was really hoping for Cam... But it turned out much better... I totally loved it!!!

You could write one for nathan!! I love your stories.

The best story yet. wow, simply amazing.

Wonderful all the ups and downs that brought it to a satisfying ending.

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

I was becoming discouraged with some of the writings here that were poorly crafted, full of spelling and grammatical errors, that so distracted me from from the story.

This story was a joy to read, you are very good at this craft and I look forward to reading all of your submissions.

I really have to say, this was a great story. I love the many emotions displayed in the characters, especially the romanticism and the insecurities; it makes the characters more believable. It just had everything; including an author who can use diction correctly, and knows what grammar is. Some of the stories on this site would be good, but the bad grammar and wrong usage of the English language surely ruins them. Keep on writing because you are amazing at it. Best of Luck!

I Loved it so very much

Fantastic, emotional story of love in all its forms

wonderfull ... loved it i am crying like a baby... this is the BEST ... o m g how can any one write such a story ... breath taking i will have to read this again.... THIS IS BETTER THAN TITANIC ...... if this went to paper back it would be a best seller... i didnt know that any one could write this kind of love story........you have a new fan as of now.......jonathan x x x x x

That was an amazing series. I just read the entire thing. I loved every second of it. The characters were well developed, the storyline was captivating and the sex was hott!

Hope to see more stories from you in the future.

Thanks again for a great story!

:)

For once, I agree with dinkyboots, BETTER THAN THE TITANIC!!!!!! Which is saad because I had family on that boat, but this was one of those stories that makes me cry. BRILLIANT!!!!!!!

I loved the story. AMAZING. Even though I am bi I would have never have done what the guy Cam did to Max. For one thing I would never treat someone as a fuck buddy. I fall in love easier then Cam with both sexes. I find it wrong to cheat on somebody. I am happy Max found Paul.

Absolutely brilliant, but every time I read it, I always end up wondering if Paul is like Cam in one more important area: does Max get to top him ? Would be so nice with an answer, so why don't you write an extra chapter ;-)

Amaizing it took me save thus long to read this perfect piece!!!!

A wonderful story, done so beautifully by an amazing writer.

I loved the story! Thanks for sharing

Great storyline and the especially the personalities of each characters. Nothing better than a happy perfect ending for a kind, sweet, and sensitive man like Max !

I really enjoyed this story, and it's very well written, but even at the end, I think that Cam is a nasty piece of work. After all, he's slept with his cousin's previous boyfriend, used someone as his down low fuck buddy knowing the fuck buddy has fallen for him, planned to fuck Max after becoming serious about Emily, and lied repeatedly to his fiance. The only part of the story I have a problem with is believing that Max would want to hang out with Cam after knowing all the shitty things he's done. And Emily should insist on condoms and regular STD testing.

It was really a lovely story, but up until the very end I was wanting the tables to turn again and have Max end up with Cam. From an authorial standpoint I think part of this stems from introducing Paul as the second man and almost as a sort of plot device/counterpoint to Cam - the man he could have been - made his character always feel a little hollow to me. I found myself most attached to Max in the end. Great reading in any case!

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Great story until this chapter. People don't get jealous, controlling and violent only once. He knew about Paul being controlling after the confrontation and then gave up that concern completely. He welcomed him back when he said it wouldn't happen again. Not ok.

best bloody love story ive ever read spot on .jonathan x

Not much more needs to be said. I enjoyed it.

I always feel more attached to the first love interest instead of one that comes mid-story, so I'm kinda sad there isn't a happy ending with him and Cam.

Despite that, it's well written and hot.

I enjoyed your writing.

Beautiful story!!!!

I'm so glad I met Max and all of the people in his world. I couldn't stop reading and the ending is believable and beautiful. Thank you ingarlm, thank you very much for sharing.

Great story! I laughed, cryed, got pissed. So it contained all the emotions needed for a great story. Thanks!🥰🥰🥰

I don’t think Cam and Emily will have no problems In the future… he lied to her about something important and also he tried to have sex with Max even though he was serious on Emily. Thanks to Max the didn’t hook up that day.