by Starcatcher
I enjoyed your writing and found it to be a fascinating vignette. My only concern is that this may have been placed in the wrong category. Typically people are expecting acts of sex that involve a dominate person leveraging a semi to non consenting individual into an act or acts of a sexual nature. Some BDSM and rape fantasy tend to overflow into this category as well. While yes your Officer Knight did get the prostitute to engage in a non compensatory sexual act, the lack of explicit detail lends this more towards short story material. You may have better luck in the short story or novella areas. Still you have my praise, sir or madam.
Voting five because it's awesome, but it doesn't belong here. Great short story, wrong category.
I think you meaqnt non-erotic, not non-consensual.