All Comments on 'Enslaved by Marilyn Ch. 03'

by Philnominal

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briefloverbriefloverover 10 years ago
very nice

I can't wait for part 4, please continue.

thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Just another sad story

About a supposedly dominant woman abusing a man. But how insecure does she have to be to treat someone in this manner? Pretty clear to me that if many people found out about her actions, she'd be in jail. That's why she hides. She's less than pond scum. Like this sad story.

FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago
Had to read it three ties to be sure

You really had your domme ask him, "Who is the greatest?" !?!

Glad your bio says you enjoy laughing. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I don't think an editor saves this mess

And your dialogue, as pointed out by the previous commentator, is terrible.

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