All Comments on 'Enslaving Elliot Ch. 03'

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Anonymousover 15 years ago

THAX

LOVE & LIKE ALL STORIES YOU WRITE MMMMM...........

WRITE OTHER STORIES PARTS TOO THAX

subgent over 15 years ago

Well done!

You captured the essence of Elliot and Jordan. i do have to admit i have had fantasies about the two of them, but You did so much better!

Thank you!

smexylissy over 15 years ago

amazing

elliot and jordan at there best; i could see it like an (extremmly naughty) episode of scrubs in my head. those two are def. delish and you made it all the better.

Anonymousover 15 years ago

really good!

i love it!

keep writing this one!

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