All Comments on 'Enter My Mind'

This is certainly worthy of a second chapter

This story has a great tune to it. I'd be interested in reading more as the story does catch my attention

..yeh nice erotic short, keep on going!

Great story.

I find the plot really stimulating. Maybe work on the plot some and make it seem not so rushed. I think it could be made into a series ;)

I absolutely loved this

I really enjoyed this story and I hope you will continue writing more chapters

Thanks

Hmm, think I'd go for the full vampire thing myself, lol. Looking the same young age until you die of 'old age' would bring along its own host of problems, lol.