All Comments on 'Erased'

by NOAHSWEE1

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
i guess it was better than a suicide

i guess you got the idea from the movie, where he edited his memories.

not bad, but the story was missing something, IMHO.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
very good

I loved it and could identify with your story. WIsh though your ending was different. Sad to say though, that my ending is similar to yours. I had to figuratively swallow the "pill", against my will. I had to make myself forget the most important man in my life, my soul mate. He forgot I existed and crushed my heart. His words were once something I loved and looked forward to, his voice was music to my ears, yet his last words to me crushed my being.

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