All Comments on 'Erica's First Date'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
So very naughty...

Claire, I've just cum so hard I think I may have broken something.... I imagined milking my swollen sticky fuckrod all over your pretty little pink cuntlips and gaping arse cup. Would love some pics to aide the imagery! JD

sfgiantsfansfgiantsfanover 14 years ago
Erica's Rape

This story was so beautiful. Poor little panty-less Erica get's thoroughly and deliciously raped. Should she go to the police? Stay tuned. I'll bet she will go home and wake up the next day horny for some more. Sluts like Erica need to be taken and taken hard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You portray the girl as a child

and then sexually abuse her. Is this really what we want on the site?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
That was one HOT story!

The ten inch cock was a bit much, but overall that was a good story. Also, I would like to read a happy ending for Erica in a future chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A fantasy and it IS erotic!

To the dude who commented that this is rape etc etc, it's a FANTASY and very erotic. Read the Marquis de Sade on Justine or whatever her name was: the same things happen and I think Erica is a bit like Justine, one of those characters who gets debased but in a good way! But I also agree with the other dude, I hope there is a happy ending for Erica in whatever stories come next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
What did you expect?

You read a story in the non-consent/reluctance category and then complain about rape? Really? Do you post negative comments on all of the non-con/rel stories? If so you really need to get out more.

This is fantasy, not reality. I think that Clarie2010 has a lot of guts exploring her desires in this way. Life can be so trying these days, let's have a little fun. This chick is super hot! Keep 'em coming!

bobjon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Very hot stories

I love reading these stories about Erica! No matter where this girl goes she ends up getting raped & fucked. I don't understand why those of you that don't like erotic stories about incest, rape, etc. read them? This person that writes these stories clearly notes in the caption what each one is about. I (as well as many others) enjoy ALL stories by Claire2010.

I can't wait to see where this hot little woman goes next to get raped!

rene_txrene_txabout 14 years ago
Loved it!!

I can't wait to read more of your stuff. Rape fantasies are one of my biggest turn ons, and this one just did it for me.

claimdeniedclaimdeniedabout 14 years ago
And they just keep getting better

Claire, you just keep topping yourself with these stories. Each one is better and hotter than the one before!

onimusha1983onimusha1983about 14 years ago
Keep going Claire2010!

Can't wait for more of this series, keeps getting better and better!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I love Erica

Great stories, can't wait for MORE!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice Story

Only way this story could be better is if it got turn into an audio story,hot sexy and never fails to get me hard reading Claires stories or even when I text her she's smokin hot and ready to please,you rock Claire,this hard is jsut for you! JT

MiloanTalesMiloanTalesabout 14 years ago
Like "Candy"

Reminds me of Candy, that classic story of the innocent young thing who couldn't stay out of trouble to save her life. Good job, Claire.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
mmmmmm

I love it when she screams rape me. That's so hot baby girl. Some of these stories you should do in audio!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Hot For Erica

Love the hot story had troble getting all the way through it. Get to clean up now sad wish you were here.

Tim

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Hello, it's a Fantasy...

Hi Claire, love all your ERICA stories and just for the record, i've never raped anyone nor do i wish to...i know that NO means NO. that having been said, i also know that a fantasy is just that, a fantasy. i also know that the person having a fantasy about being raped does not wish to be actually raped. i see you've been getting some Anonymous negative comments, don't fret it a bit. keep listening to your own muse and let

the ones who have problems with your stories go someplace else for their

reading material. keep on keeping on, as we used to say here in the colonies!

much love,

david2010

stoptouchinthosemonkees

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Really hot and sexy.

Hot,sexy and really can turn me on rock hard.your phone sex experience surely helps a lot.but i guess the main reason is that you are gifted.

2406

AGreyFoxxxAGreyFoxxxabout 14 years ago
Deliciously Dirty

Erica's innocence makes this such a hot tale. But deep down, I think she likes getting fucked and forced into doing these depraved acts. I would love to meet her!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Love Erica

Erica is so innocent yet so dirty. I can read her stories again and again.

bigd2k622bigd2k622about 14 years ago
what an imagination of fantasy

This fantasy is so erotic. Ericas body betrays her.

satanclaus69satanclaus69almost 14 years ago
I can not get enough

You stories are great. You have such a great imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
i am Anan Ymuse

wow. the packaging of the story is superb.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
best yet

christ this story made my cock so fucking hard, i thought it'd burst! keep it going claire

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
five stars

Wow! That was hot. I can't believe I've only just discovered your stories, claire.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Not enough stars available!

Christ Claire, you're such a fucking hot storysmith! I was painfully hard as I read of Erica's ordeal - the bitch fucking loved it really. You can really put a hot story together Babe. More, a lot more please! xx Ken xx

CuCernunnosCuCernunnosover 13 years ago
Pretty darn good

Very interesting story young lady. I especially liked how you handled her eventually caving in to desire and asking for more. I'm more of a vaginal nonconsent kind of guy (with impregnation overtones) but this story definitely had me arroused. Well done!

stoptouchinthosemonkeesstoptouchinthosemonkeesover 13 years ago
have mercy!!

wow, baby girl!! that was hot and then some!! i love your fantasies...they're sooo tough and soooo raw!! and sooooo very very hot!!! five stars, Princess...i only wish it could be more!! i'd love to play that fantasy with you some time!! lots of love, daddy xxx

Jesse1369Jesse1369over 13 years ago
Oh my god!

Love it and hated it at the same time. Pour little slut Erica getting her tight little asshole raped by her dates daddy. Yet it seems that Erica still had a fucking hot time. I bet her tight little ass didn't close up for a few days after that monster used it. So an erotic little nymph being used and abused. Even though she loved the abused and having her little body used b them both. Cumming even as she pleaded to get away. yummy thoughts all around. Keep it up, Baby!

PoorHumbertPoorHumbertabout 13 years ago
Simply the best

Fantastic stuff.Just thinking about Erica on her knees with her ass in the air gets me hard.Read this and try not to get stiff,really,try it,even if she just made me squirt,i still start to stir again.

Oh Erica what am i going to do with you.BAD GIRL.

Love Daddy

P.S. Guys.vote high,vote high,vote high.

iamcuriousblueiamcuriousbluealmost 13 years ago
Hottt

Again with the heat. You are really into expressing yourself. I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

This girl is such a dumb ass

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
dumb ass? HOT ASS!!!

Hahaha U mean HOT ASS, I think!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I feel so sorry for Erica. Why do you have her keep getting raped?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Good stuff

I love Clair's spoken word stories so much sometimes I forget about her printed things. And they're damn good!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Damn that was good but could've been a bit more nastier and a lot more dirty talking! Erotic Erica should be her new name in the next story aftermath of being raped so much she fell into the undeniable urges of wanting hot rough hardcore manhandling. Kinky nasty dirty fucking in every hole and in every way possible it assumed her daily it's all she thought about was how to be raped like that over and over again! She became addicted to the violent thrill of it all! Being a victim and a young tiny girl made it all the more hot! Make a story on that you hot sexy author you!!! Lets c if it makes a good fucking story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A masterpiece

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