All Comments on 'Erotic Hypnosis Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Drivel.

Read some mainstream fiction and try to imitate it. THEN come back and try to write porn.

JeanCFNMJeanCFNMalmost 7 years ago
Lovely use of the hypnosis

Usually the hynotised person is used by the man.

You managed to make this sexy without becoming

involved yourself so it was really erotic.

I would have enjoyed reading a next time version

Thank you

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