All Comments on 'Erotica Blunders: Take 1'

Dear Rrrosyn, Your sense of humor is wonderful. I haven't laughed that much in a long time. You missed a good one. "She took his head in her hands and moved him on top of her body", sounds a lot like professional wrestling and they are strictly amature. Seriously, you make many good points that I, as a wanna-be writer, will take to heart. Thanks again for a good belly laugh.

This was very light hearted and I enjoyed it. Guess proof reading is a good practice to partake in before submitting and sharing any creative piece, no?