All Comments on 'Eternal Hearts Ch. 01'

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FromSunFromSunover 16 years ago
Kylie with fangs...

Not convinced by the vampire stuff - come across kinda thin - but the rest is very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
kinda thin?

How is the vampire stuff "kinda thin"? Its a classic vampire encounter, how could it be thicker?

Looking forward to more, keep at it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Kylie!

Easily the best writer I've read on this site. I never get tired of your Kylie stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
eternal Kylie

Your Kylie stories are by far the best thing on this site. Considering that you had to build up the story in this first part it was still very hot. The lesbian stuff was nice but I hope for some real dick in the next chapters. And I'm really curious what kind of "pet" that is in the cellar. Now that Kylie is eternal I hope your supply of new Kylie stories will be eternal too. I'll never get tired of her. Keep up the great work!

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