All Comments on 'Ethan's Wife'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Absurd and completely devoid of any erotic content

Pathetic and awful. This is NOT erotica. This is just a ridiculously bad story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Ummm Good But...

It was great up to the part with the hormones, then it was just..not good, but before that, very good plot and descriptions!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
fuck 'em, it was great

Fun story - I love your stuff

punkin1077punkin1077over 15 years ago
it started good but then.....

this story was beyond weird...it started off really well but it got all weird when he started turning warren into wanda...i think you could've given them a happy ending without warren having to change....i'm not even sure if ethan really loved warren, if so why change him...the whole thing just left me utterly confused...and for warren to become all dependent like that was just so unlikely to me....you turned him into a complete wuss...sorry just my opinion, i don't mean to sound harsh or anything but this story had such potential and now its ruined.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Riiiiiiiiight......

Man, you ruined this one. This could have been as good as "My Greatest Fantasy" but you mucked it up with the transgender stuff. I don't know if you've noticed but most of your readers are not interested in "pussies". Don't do this again please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Magnificent

I didn't skip one word. It was a great romance with a happy ending. I wish I had a man like Ethan.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

As far as unlikely stories goes, this one is way out there - more unlikely, frankly, than the stories of werewolves and vampires.

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