All Comments on 'Ethel and Gene, A New Life Ch. 01'

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cathycantoocathycantooover 9 years ago
Bring on chapter 2

Excellent start, please continue

luvtodoitluvtodoitover 9 years ago
Well done!

Looking forward to part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

You have started the basis for a great story to continue. I think Mom and Gene will really enhance each others sexual needs and it will be HOT......... Cannot wait - thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

5 stars more chapters

Aerodeck1969Aerodeck1969over 9 years ago
More

Great story love how it is written and I hope it gets dirty and messy between mother and son. Please post soon again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Great story keep it up hope it gets hotter with mum

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Interesting story

Started very well with realistic description of panty activity and moms initial reaction. Presented an opportunity for mom to properly discipline and control son.

SarfLondonLadSarfLondonLadover 9 years ago
First Rate

A really good story, well paced and realistically developed. More please.

BPK247BPK247almost 8 years ago
Nice Story

I really enjoyed reading this story. It progressed a little faster than I thought, but I was still surprised nonetheless with the ending of this particular chapter.

I was particularly turned on by the part where the mother was sliding the penis of her son between her vagina lips without penetration. I had a girlfriend who would do that and we would both come that way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Panties and pleasant pussy

Mama and her wet and pretty panties were the key to the new delicious and development of new fun and exciting times. The naughty moments in the future of my mom's tasty vaginal cream came out. She was a great fucking bitch. I eventually impregnated my own mother's womb. The baby was born a beautiful girl. I'm my own babies father and lover .

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefabout 4 years ago
Lots of panties!!!

Sorry that I can't give you the five stars that I want to, but there isn't any way to do so. So glad that Mom isn't a beauty queen and Gene isn't built like Rambo with a 12 inch dick. This story, so far, is more about normal people that one would find going about their lives. It was nice to get into the panty play rather quickly. It's one very hot story so far. Thanks

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