All Comments on 'Etienne and Monique Ch. 02'

Is that all there is? Seems like there should be more chapters.

There are 5 chapters written so far. Aat that point it hits a natural pause (I hope that you'll agree) allowing breathing space to add more, which I fully intend to do.

Bravo!!!!! This chapter was without a doubt one of the most masterful pieces I've ever read on this site or any other!!! Dialog was ultra realistic, character development fabulous, and the French flawless. Additionally, the psychological manipulation by Etienne was truly intriguing and lent a deeper level to the story. The amalgamation of these elements not only make a story fantastic but rather literary art. You are not only maintaining a standard you are far surpassing it!!! Five stars do not begin to do this submission justice. Thanks for another great chapter, I'll be idly twittiling my thumbs awaiting the next.