All Comments on 'Eva and the Black Amazons Pt. 02'

What an interesting read. The key here to me is the Amazon or broken speech....very tantalizing. Sunga and Munga are particularly interesting, being muscular, and well formed. I like all the lesbian action, they seem clean, and know what turns them on. Not so back sliddin' after all, huh?? No matter what the situation; work, play, whim, whatever, they seem to grab a partner and jump in the bushes to jump ON the bush!! Pretty heady stuff!! I like the sexual orientation of this series. Eva knows how to convince them easily!! Sheera is a quick learner as well!! I like the way she picks up and learns, then practices what she learns!! I like this!! Keep it coming, blackbel!! Wilhelm

After reading this second installment, I want to share with you and with the other readers who may come across your story my admiration for your talent. There was a risk, in this particular story, of flattening the characters of the black Amazons, I mean making them all just bimbo dolls who say "amen" to every whim of the white photographer. This has not happened: Samba, the leader, thinks honestly that she is having a fair share in the submission deal. Once more, as in the first part, dialogue is very well used and pushes the story forward without effort.

The final scene, when Samba masturbates with the chain, has to be among the most original ideas in a field where original ideas are not at all rare.

When is part 3 coming?

Hallo blackbel2003!

Hmm, an interesting concept.... I have to say, I'm enjoying your story,,, but love, you may be overlooking the obvious! _ Can anyone guess what this is?

Gay Kat.