All Comments on 'Everything You Want Ch. 02'

But damn! 8 years? Loving the pace so far.

Damn, that was hot

I'm so glad it turned out to be a wet dream haha

So much love to give, yet will it be received?

I'm actually glad it was a dream because I would have been confused as f*** if it wasn't. I mean, how could Angie go from barely noticing Conner in a sexual way to suddenly confessing that she pleasures herself while thinking of him?? It would have been a bit much... Well, you still had me convinced it was real though! So, well done! I'm excited for the next chapter!!!

I loved the anti-climax, the whole dream thing. You had me laughing at myself for being fooled (I'm not usually tricked as easily as that). Excellent romantic touch with the note. Keep up the excellent work!

gave the characters, ....and the chapters really flowed. Can't wait for you next installment. Well done. JV

you are a brilliant writer! I can't wait for the next installment,if you could make it longer?

Also,do you plan to continue foxy's story when they get back to LA?

i thought it was real but damn it was amazing pleaseeeeeeeeeeee update asap

One word: BRILLIANT!!!

THIS STORY IS SO GREAT. YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER. FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!